Thriving Fire

I liked the way the poem was one big metaphor for change. The metaphor is an important poetic device and I can see by this poem that you understand it ...

This poem wasn't bad, with great uses of imagey and well-conveyed emotions. Personally I love the night sky as I've had several strange dreams on the sky which makes this ...

Those books are magic... Jonathan stroud is brilliant at combining action and humour, along with Nathaniel's cold-hearted seriousness. Bartimaeus may just be one of the best characters of recent years

The great thing about this song is it's flexibility... I could see a more melodic punk band ripping threw this song on a stage, or a heavy metal band thrashing ...

Not bad.... The characterisation is good, with every word and statement reflecting and suiting each character. It's simply, clearly written, which is good, making it easier to draw the reader ...

First and Foremost: Don't take this the wrong way, but I love people who celebrate who they are. So, as for criticising this, I'm biased. But here goes. It's simple. ...